Give me respite


Why does my heart still skip a beat on hearing your voice?
Why does this spark of hope ignite again?
That maybe,there is a part of you that still remembers me.
Or worst even,a part that hates me,for I did hurt you bad.
I’m stuck in space,no way to outrun your memories
The pain wont let me sleep,the want wont let me live
I have no right to ask you to come to my aid
Knowing its hard to forgive and forget
So I suggest that you hurt me back and be even maybe
For the blame in your eyes kills me from inside
I can’t be near you nor go away
Hurt me bad for I deserve it.
Do whatever,just give me respite. . . .

P.S:I did try to complete it,but guess,some things are never meant to be complete.

20 thoughts on “Give me respite

  1. You are Soundin’ very senti too :p and Extremely Hilarious! people are very shallow. They go after physical attributes. You’d be the luckiest women if u find a mature One around 😀
    And Your PS: Allah Di kasamayy 🙂 i’m Feelin’ so Damm High !

  2. LOL! pleasure is all mine, But truly, i culdnt resist after reading your P:S, btw wht exctly the point made you a big laugh? Pls enlighten!.. because it feels like ! aankhon k aagay daant aa gaye hain :p

    • rofl.The words “Allah di kasmay”they have a cute history.I used to use them myself.And when I read them,the past flashed before my eyes.You cant blame me for enjoying that one.And my P.S made you “Damn High”,was I supposed to sit like a statue and not burst into a laugh on that one? 😀

    • Well,moderation is kinda an approval from the blogger to let the comment show on his or her page or hide it.Its just a precautionary measure to avoid spams showing and flooding the page.

  3. hahaha! Sigh. i can’t keep calm anymore :p because i m a reader since long, but i didnt read poems actly. haha (IIUI hostalite) baat to such hay…magar baat hay ruswai ki !:p lol tht’s wht i’m known for. #Boolakaar

  4. sigh, alrighty! some girls are obsessed with emotions. lool ok,
    Well, i want you to help me running my page, If you’re Ok with tht.
    but i really insist, coz you’re good and hv a vision …

    • Guess I’, on that page already.But I dunno,m not the kinda person for this task.I mean blogging or rather writing comes naturally to me.being a page admin is another story.
      But thanks for the offer 🙂

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